FreelikeaRiver

Wow...this is so powerful. It reaches right into the core of the reader and makes them pay attention. The imagery and metaphors are gorgeous. I don't think there's anything that ...

This was so deep...I felt your hurt and pain bleeding through the pain, filled with metaphors and imagery. Your words paint the image beautifully. The only thing I noticed thay ...

This is a very good poem. In the beginning, it makes me feel think of the future, possibly hopeful. The metaphors really reinforce this. It makes me think that the ...