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Wow. It's a really great poem. The last three lines is my favorites.

I wonder what you see, when you look right me. Do you see who I really am? Or just what I pretend to be. When you look into my eyes, ...

I wish I can turn around, So I can look away and couldn't see the ground. There lay the scar of how hard I've hit, the rock bottom that hard ...

Nope is it good? I read the ABC Murder and The Orient Express. I think it's brillian

I do enjoy it though as a matter of fact. I got to see it July 11 at Midnight...first one!!! It was really good. Disapointing when they cut the prefects ...

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I prefer Hardback, it's easier for after I read I can also collect and it'll look decent. I mean not that paper back wouldn't but it works better for me ...

I think it's really long and u use the word Teacher alot and after the first line that say about teacher said to student that should be enough, you should ...

I agree with AceAnriertenz, it does give the impression of one's conciousness but i feel like there are too many pauses in your poem and I kinda feel like I ...

[spoiler]Yeah, but no one could really be Lily! POOR SNAPE I LOVE YOU!!![/spoiler] I don't get it; why does practically no one love Snape? He's awesome! Sooo much better than ...

It is certainly good. I read it as a requirement for my freshman year. I loved it! [spoiler] I understand how she feels though it would be a tough spot ...

Took me about 18 hours. I think it's the best one of all 7. I'm looking forward to see this one and the half-blood prince in movie, i think deathly ...

I'm FreedomSeeker. English is my second language so when I start posting it'll be alot of grammar errors [ You guys can probably find in this too] Grammar is my ...