FreedAlice

Vague was exactly how I felt when I wrote this. And rest assured, I'll work on developing it. :)

Other than a few spelling errors, I don't see anything else wrong that I can comment on. I'll wait for the next chapter! :)

Well, I'm hooked despite the fact, that this too was a bit short like the prologue. Still, it seems like a good starter to me seeing as I want to ...

lil' ganster verde :'o

Another wonderful insight to the hearts of many around the world! Keep going at it! :D

Never mind short, I love it! I can feel her emotions perfectly with the wonderful descriptions! :D

Inside a surprisingly young innkeeper was leaning over the counter, telling a joke to a patron. I got confused the first time I read this part here, thinking there was ...

Bah, I'll stick with good ol' drawing by hand ;)

The wish. You left. I cried. The love, the times, I wished. The wars, the forgiveness, I wished. The smiles, the laughter, I wished. But mine was not to be. ...

'sup people! Oh, oops...did I already messed up the grammar rule...? Let me do that again: *cough* *cough* Hiya people! You guys can just call me Alice if you want, ...