Frederick101

really good, even though i ain't that big a poetry fan. I like the idea. Nice work!

the first one is some evil guy i drew, the second is just some halloween monster thing.

sweet, its better than i could do. the colors pretty good

still interesting, but for chapters there pretty short. you could make them a little longer. i cant wait for chapter 4!

this is nice and interesting, nice dialogue. But would "throne" really be a good word to describe the president?

this is really good, i want to read the rest of this story. You describe whats going on really well.

pretty hard to understand, put more detail. But overall i like the story

This is hilarious!! You should right comercials for a living!! By the way I used that stuff and now i can see the future :smt003

teacher: where is your paper? me: i threw it away in the bathroom, you woulndt want it anyway teacher: wat do u mean? me: well when i got to school ...

There were a few mistakes as the guys above pointed out, but overall a great story! Keep it up!

If you could have any skill and be extremely good at it but be less than mediocre at everything else, what would you choose? Hmm... I am skilled at both ...

Ok the story im writing has me making up a world. How would ya'll come up with names for towns and countries and other places. If you have a suggestion ...

Brian Jacques is AWESOME. The books make me hungry to, especially there drinks (like October Ale, that makes me thirsty!!). You should also read his flying dutchman series. They got ...

Dude the first was good but the second was AWESOME!! This could make a pretty good book.