Frederick101

Really interesting, i want to read the next part. Very Good

the face is real good. her left hand isn't the best, but over all pretty good

this is good. but thats a big fire, whats burning? a house or something?

those are great, even the one you said was bad. Im wondering how you got those VIEWS! You should do more!

those are great, even the one you said was bad. Im wondering how you got those VIEWS! You should do more!

this is great, the guy in the middle is the best. i like how detailed they are, and that the ghost says "ghost" lol

the gryphon and highwind are my favorite. I like how detialed they are. but the lazers on a couple of 'em dont look real, you should make them a little ...

haha this is hilarious!! his mom is so weird. this is a cliffhanger so you have to write a part 2!!!

hmm.. very descriptive, very good for a prolugue. i like the idea, but i still dont get what the main idea is, well i guess i don't need to since ...

very cool, really detailed. the doll actually looks sad

i liked both of the wizard ones, there robes were nice. the lightning could use a little work, but still good :)

this is great. I mean the cat looks.......SCOTTISH!!! really good!

the second one's shoe on the left is supposed to be facing away, therefore looking smaller, but i can understand.

this is really great. I love old-looking pictures. i like how you wrote your name and put the quill pen.

well i did sort of model his jacket after jack skelington, but the rest i did on my own. thanks for the comments