Freakette

Thanks for the comments. AngelKnight, thanks, I hadn't even remembered I could do that, lol. And Blondie, I already had so much written that I got impatient. Now each post ...

Thanks for the comment. The only reason I put so many chapters up is because I had so much of the story written already, but I'll make the start and ...

Thanks for the comment, and yeah, I probably should splice the chapters... e.e as for Wraith, I didn't find his location exactly important the way things were going for Annabelle ...

o: That's some pretty powerful stuff. I really like it, it conveys the doubt and pain in the narrator very well. Great job, I wish I could write poetry like ...

c: I decided to upload more of this instead of starting a new story. Thanks for reading and reviewing~ ------------------------------ The next few days consisted of Kendell coming to the ...

Thanks~ :D Honestly, I can't wait to finish writing the entire novel so I can edit everything afterwards... Joy... >.< lol. I'll update soon~

This would make the cutest children's book, I think. I loved this, it was cute and funny at the same time, even though at first glance I thought it would ...

Hey guys, I have enough points to post twice and all, but I think I'm going to post one chapter of The Stranger and another bit of an older story ...

It's a nice poem, but as the other comments stated, there are some grammar issues. Nothing too major, but you've been getting your/you're and to/too mixed up a bit too ...

Wow, this was really cool. Interesting, too. It's nice to see something like this every now and then, something a bit more out of the ordinary. Your grammar was good, ...

Thanks guys, the reviews make me happy. ^-^ I'll post more chapters as soon as I can. HunterofFox, thanks~ :D And I didn't even notice that xD lol snickerdooly, when ...

Whoa. I totally lied! The last bit of the book was chapters 2 and 3. Sorry, haha! These are chapters 4 through 6 for sure. I'm only uploading so many ...

Thanks for the comments everyone, I'll have the next couple chapters up in a few minutes. Re-reading this, yes AgentChameleon, it was a bit stuffed with imagery. AngelKnight900, glad you ...

Um, I already have a lot of this written, so I decided to mash a couple chapters together. Hope you don't mind. xD Don't be afraid to say anything harsh. ...

It's rather cute, but kind of... Picture perfect? A bit too movie-like for a real life scenario. I agree with the other reviews, it reminds me of Twilight. However, it's ...