I'm a 13 year old girl, starting freshman year. I love writing, reading, drawing, playing music, and experimenting with makeup, but writing is definitely my favorite thing to do. I'll accept any feedback on my story.
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge