Freak

Teenweirdo, Children run and the leaves crunch at their feet. Maybe you could put 'crunch under their feet'? I think that would make itsound better. I liked it! I agree, ...

Hey Kaylyn, I did feel your poem. Although, I think you tried to rhyme too hard. I find that when I write poetry if I try and make the words ...

531! Woo hoo! Lol. I got started a little late but tomorrow I'm gonna write all day and catch up. -Freak :elephant:

I didn't fall in love with a ghost; not at first, at least. I'm so excited for this! I hope I don't quit (: -Freak :elephant:

Thanks! I was just listening to my iPod last night and was listening to that song and I got this story line all of the sudden and BAM! It just ...

Yes it is me! (: 9/10 for you. The apple nearly put me into a trance! LOL.

8/10 haha! Lawyers are sooo dull. It made me laugh. -Freak :elephant:

9/10, NaNoWriMo sounds fun, I'm just not sure if I'm doing it yet... -Freak

But Not Tonight By Freak Snuffing his cigarette out, Derek lay down on the damp earth underneath the swing set of the elementary school he had only attended three short ...

I enjoyed this :smt023 Was it talking about people? That's what I got out of it mostly, like how people may expect others to be a certain way, but often ...

*Claps* This was good. I love reading poetry, this was really really good! Oh, I already said that. Um, put some periods and stuff, that's all I have to say. ...