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Re: how much do you need to begin a book?
Im writing a fiction book, and im going to create a world more or less like ours in terms of history but i want to know how much do i ...
Jan 23, 2012 -
Re: The Apocalypse
hey, my name is francis and i will review what i thought about your story entitled "The Apocalypse" Ok good start I enjoy a good 2012 apocalypse setting. now im ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Red Skies (short story) first 1000 words
yeah use less words and try to hook me more in the beginning. i lost interest real fast
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: the box chapter one
just thought of this story did it in an an hour hopefully you guys like it i did. this is just a preview kind of tell me if you want ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: book one chapter one
hello this is my first submission please i could use advice let me know if you want more or i can start over or write a new book. thanks chapter ...
May 1, 2010