Frail-Fairytale

Actually, I very much disagree with the two first comments. The simplicity in style reflected Donald, he's a very easy and child-like boy with no worries. All that was on ...

I was drawn in by the title, and I've been trying not to read anything too long today since my pain killers don't seem to be working, but I did ...

Nicely done, though short, it gets the message across to the reader. There were many good metaphores and comparisons involved, of which I did enjoy. However, my biggest fault that ...