FragmentsOfSorrow

@UnicornNerd: If you read my spoiler, there is a lot to still be explained. If you read my comments, you'll also see that the last paragraph will be explained. But, ...

jasminebells: Thanks for the review! There are a couple of things I want to hit on, though, just to be clear. Considering they are different paragraphs, it is actually proper ...

This easily has the potential to be one of my all-time favorite short stories I've ever written. I haven't decided if I'm using chapters yet, so (sadly) it is currently ...

Congratulations, arspoetica! You are my first non-poem to review! I am a story-writer myself, so I will enjoy seeing how others write! First things first: Don't be afraid to change ...

Sadly, I must disagree with most about the flow and rhythm of the poem. In my personal opinion, most of the stanzas were too wordy, or didn't mesh well with ...

Great poem, all in all. Though I don't know you, I am quite proud of you for having the guts to post it on here. :) On a more related ...

Wishes are something beautiful that everyone has. They give us all hope, and joy; it's just something to always look forward to. Wishes are put in many different forms, Bucket ...

Wow, that was just...beautiful! I love the first two lines the most, I think. The first line, to catch a falling star, is something I think everyone subconsciously wishes they ...

Hahaha, oh, my friend. You make me smile! :D I looooove 54, just because I'm a writing nerd, and prepositional phrases rock! (Unless you're in latin. -.-) I've never noticed ...

Here we stand, Guardians of the Heart. We are protectors of this land, Keeping watch for this piece of art. Others must pass tests, And go through initiations. If they ...

This is a story I had actually thought about writing a while back. Well, something similar. So its cool to see you writing an idea I once had. Anyways... To ...

Howdy! So, this has GREAT potential to be an awesome story. The plot is there, it just needs a tad bit of work. The beginning was great. That first statement ...

Behold! The letters of Love. They’re elegant like a swan And pure like a dove. Now note with me the letter L. The loving memories; The stories you will never ...

Think. Think way back. Think way back to your childhood. Now, try to remember. Remember those dreadful nights when you heard something crawling in your house. You would slowly, silently, ...