Fortuna

hej hej! Don't be shy dear, we're all just learning, that's what we've come here for. The fact that you want to improve your writing by having it be critiqued ...

Welcome Alyss! I really loved that book too ;) Can't say I'm big on romance, but I'm sure you'll find lots of people in the Romance section who share your ...

Water fasting for about 20 days should get my mom off my back about having gained so much weight over the past few months. I am not going back down ...

The character development in here was excellent, I actually kinda like these people! XD So good job with that. I felt like your beginning was very interesting and attention grabbing. ...

I personally suggest you cut this up into smaller chunks and post it, it's rather a lot to read for one sitting. I feel like you need to pull the ...

In the mountains of Isstern in the kingdom of Vil, where lived a large group of trolls. They were a fierce tribe, who possessed both brute strength and powerful magic. ...

Kyllorac and Octocoffee, it's a pleasure to meet the both of you! Thank you so much for your kind and honest reviews, I shall keep your cirtiques in my mind ...

I have a story I would like more help with thank you!

Can you take a look at my story? thank you very much!

Ooh, this is interesting and I'm going to have to go and read the other chapters now. My initial assumption was that the creature was a demon, but now I'm ...

Hello everyone, I'm Fortuna and I'm particularly interested in fantasy stories. I'm a horrid little nit-picker and very detail oriented, and rest assured that I will tear your piece to ...

I feel like the bottom can be cropped a bit and the whole picture could be shrunk, but it's a lovely photo. I love the contrast between the colors and ...

It's nice to meet you XYZinnia :) Thank you for explaining the color system. It's actually Swedish, I'm just explaining to Demeter that I'm not Swedish, rather, I'm an American ...

This is a very nice story, I love the mood that you set up. The pacing is very nice and the words flow together. I think that you should leave ...

Hello Rosalie! I'm a new person as well, and I look forward to seeing your stories. Do you write fantasy stories? I ask because that's my genre of choice ;)