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Fortuna

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: if i cared

    I get that you were trying to go for a sense of apathy here, but it just made the poem drag on and feel very weary and slow. I don't ...

    Aug 2, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Blasphemy

    There is nothing more to this place than just waiting for our chance to rule again, to hope again, to live again. For too long, the demons and Fallen had ...

    Jun 25, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Light Blue Eyes - Prologue

    *cracks knuckles* alrighty, let's see here. First off, I'm interested by the story concept, but I feel that you need to describe the different 'worlds' a little better. At first, ...

    Jun 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: New :)

    hej hej! Nice ta meetcha! I'm Fortuna and I'm relatively new as well. I can't wait to read your stuff!

    Jun 17, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Incog's Tempting Reviews

    please and thank you!

    Jun 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Prayer

    For what is life without God’s grace? Amurial thought as he walked on top of dewy grass and marveled at the beauty of the night sky. How long have I ...

    Jun 9, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Just who is "Hawkie" anyway?

    Hi again Hawkie! It's your number one fan Fortuna here! ;) Ha, you sound quite a bit like I was when I was your age. Let's hope you don't turn ...

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: 'Spandangters'~ A Naruto fanfiction

    I really didn't know what to expect when I decided to read this- I'm not much of a Naruto fan anymore but I remember enough of the series to get ...

    Jun 5, 2009
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Azula - Story of a Princess (Part 1)

    O__O Excuse me, I clicked on this thinking I'd have a good story about my favorite character, I didn't expect to come out of this worshipping you. This is exactly ...

    Jun 5, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Holy reviews, Batman!

    ooh! ooh! Pick me! It's a children's story I haven't finished yet, tell me what you think! I need motivation to keep working on this thing u.u

    Jun 4, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Anyone knows how to speak another language?

    Swedish, and an itty bit of Latin. Semper ubi sub ubi!

    Jun 4, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: The Stella Shop...

    I'm writing a children's book, here's the first part of it: Thank you so much!

    Jun 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: heyy

    Hej Flower! Hope you have a lot of fun on this site, some people should be around to explain rules and such. Can't wait to see your work!

    Jun 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mama's all that matters.

    [Here on request] Okay, the previous editors have done quite a nice job with most of the corrections, and I strongly suggest you follow their opinions. As far as the ...

    Jun 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey Peepsz.

    Welcome TJ! I'm Fortuna, a relatively new member here. I look forward to seeing what you have writing-wise, and I hope you have a lot of fun here on YWS!

    Jun 1, 2009


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites