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Re: if i cared
I get that you were trying to go for a sense of apathy here, but it just made the poem drag on and feel very weary and slow. I don't ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Blasphemy
There is nothing more to this place than just waiting for our chance to rule again, to hope again, to live again. For too long, the demons and Fallen had ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Light Blue Eyes - Prologue
*cracks knuckles* alrighty, let's see here. First off, I'm interested by the story concept, but I feel that you need to describe the different 'worlds' a little better. At first, ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: New :)
hej hej! Nice ta meetcha! I'm Fortuna and I'm relatively new as well. I can't wait to read your stuff!
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: Incog's Tempting Reviews
please and thank you!
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Prayer
For what is life without God’s grace? Amurial thought as he walked on top of dewy grass and marveled at the beauty of the night sky. How long have I ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Just who is "Hawkie" anyway?
Hi again Hawkie! It's your number one fan Fortuna here! ;) Ha, you sound quite a bit like I was when I was your age. Let's hope you don't turn ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: 'Spandangters'~ A Naruto fanfiction
I really didn't know what to expect when I decided to read this- I'm not much of a Naruto fan anymore but I remember enough of the series to get ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Azula - Story of a Princess (Part 1)
O__O Excuse me, I clicked on this thinking I'd have a good story about my favorite character, I didn't expect to come out of this worshipping you. This is exactly ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Holy reviews, Batman!
ooh! ooh! Pick me! It's a children's story I haven't finished yet, tell me what you think! I need motivation to keep working on this thing u.u
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: Anyone knows how to speak another language?
Swedish, and an itty bit of Latin. Semper ubi sub ubi!
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: The Stella Shop...
I'm writing a children's book, here's the first part of it: Thank you so much!
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: heyy
Hej Flower! Hope you have a lot of fun on this site, some people should be around to explain rules and such. Can't wait to see your work!
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Mama's all that matters.
[Here on request] Okay, the previous editors have done quite a nice job with most of the corrections, and I strongly suggest you follow their opinions. As far as the ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Hey Peepsz.
Welcome TJ! I'm Fortuna, a relatively new member here. I look forward to seeing what you have writing-wise, and I hope you have a lot of fun here on YWS!
Jun 1, 2009
