Foreverlost007

It's really good. I don't think there are any mistakes (although sp has never been my strong point) It's a great expresive lymric. Keep up the good work! :wink:

Hi I'm also a new member! I love writing my stories but there is no one to read/reveiw/edit them. Hope i can meet everybody here soon. Yours truely Foreverlost007 :smt020