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Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!! Wow. That was wholly strange. I didn't at all expect something like this. Okay, first of all with Harry. I thought he was ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! First of all, I didn't understand why you suddenly switched the POV in the middle of a chapter. Like you wrote 12 whole chapters ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review! The plot moved forward quite a bit in this part. Sinister mechanical noise. This was quite an interesting phrase but it was ignored ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Two consecutive chapters from Daisy's POV. It's definitely intriguing. Great, then the four of you can I thought there were 5 people. I just ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Now we have Sehlingen, the very first place in which the story had started. It reminds us of how they thought of Leonard in ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Yet another funny argument between the trio. These arguments are quite enjoyable to read for the readers. Daisy seems to have some wit too, ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Wow, we missed the second plan! Like why the characters have to think and talk when something important is going on. Very inattentive characters! ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! I am very bad at comparing two writings but let's see what I can do. I will mainly focus on the changes. I arrived ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Now we have the worst problem in front of us. The consequences of the escape will not very good and it's quite predictable that ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! A girl with a wide-set sallow face and tattered blonde-almost-white hair drags her feet as she walks slowly down the dingy street. It goes ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Seems like the whole chapter is full of dialogues. It's a bit sad that Daisy didn't understand some portions of the explanation and I ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! I really like the fact that the whole humanity is co-operating with the team. I expected some sort of chaos but it went ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! These short stories are really fun to read. Let's get into it. Denise's friends have influenced her very badly. Maybe they too were influenced ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! At last we got our final person and it was very much predictable. A bit flat too, actually. It would have been quite interesting ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! In this part, Harry became very emotional. I liked how you cut all the fun comments from this part. It helped the readers to ...