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Re: You wonder what happens after you die
One word: Amazing I really like how it just, flows so well, because nobody will know these things until it happens. But they cannot tell us. It really gets you ...
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Re: Who are you?
It can be confusing with the breaks but I thought that it was amazing. I didn't mind the breaks because it was really good!
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Re: Dead Magic.
This is amazing. Its really interesting when you imagine it like a movie. The Poem is beautiful and creative. Great Job!
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Re: Life
the first paragraph: Yep. I agree. the second: Dont get it but its interesting. Good Poem!
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Re: Eleven Years Ago
Interesting Poem. I've never heard one like this before. Very Nice Poem. :)
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Re: Hey! I'm new here
Have fun, and good luck. I've recently joined myself, and I'm testing everything I can out. Hopefully I can get Chapter 2 of my story up tonight. ~Good Luck, ForeverTwilightAngel ...
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Re: The Moon
Beautiful. I thought it was really creative and intresting. (im not that good at reviews, just compliments...)
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Re: Fearless
This is really, really good! As soon as I read the first paragraph I was hooked. I have nothing to say other than how amazing that was!
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Re: Parallel Universe: Book 1: Chapter 1 (Edited)
Chapter One Marissa My thoughts were interrupted by a sudden blast of heat. The thermometer was just mildly hot, and then changed quickly, much to fast for any weather. At ...
Dec 12, 2010