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Re: Lion King
I am definatly interested in this piece. However, it's Kovu, unless you've changed it, and its short. I wish it was longer, because it's very interesting! Good Job!
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: A Suede Boot
I realize this has already been reviewed, but I personally like reviewing, so here goes.. Red is corrections, Blue are things I'm commenting on. The early morning cold bit at ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Childhood.
This is amazing. One, because I'm experiancing this myself, and it does show how my life is going right now. Much too fast. I have nothing at all to correct, ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Angels - Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more, that is amazing!
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Remembering...
I dont really review things, just compliment/give small pointers. It's a bit confusing but I thought it was pretty good. It gave emotion and an image (to me, at least) ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Things I Hate
I personally liked this, and I have nothing bad to say. Good Job!
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Hidden(Prologue)(I don't think its that good, but im trying)
Thank you both for the feedback. I'll edit it later, I'm having alot of trouble with this story but I can't stop writing it. I struggle with this story over ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Hidden(Prologue)(I don't think its that good, but im trying)
Read after or Before I don't care... Mystica (The narrarator) is speaking in her Native tounge but it has been 'translated' to english. After she gets to the factory does ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Parallel Universe: Book 1: Chapter 1 (Edited)
Thanks guys. I really appreciate this, and I just edited it. Thanks for the feedback. I know its still not good, but I did as much as I thought of. ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Newbie(:
I am also new to the site, adapting slowly but well. I hope you find your way around, and welcome to YWS!
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Nickolvia
This is personally, realy good. I enjoyed reading it and understood what the horse felt, even though I'm not one. Creative and Intresting, and I really enjoyed reading it.
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Forgotten.
You shouldn't feel depressed. The poem might feel depressing but that doesn't mean it isn't good. When I read poems, I look forward to visualizing what the author wrote, and ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: *Insert Epic Title Here*
I thought that this was really good, for not being a poet. I've never been a good poet, but I've never thought of using it to help writers block. That's, ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Broken Away but not Freed Chapter One
This Is really good! I can't wait to read more.
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle
Lol Really funny, I especially like Ron's first set of lines. Very creative and funny
Dec 12, 2010