ForeverTwilightAngel

I am definatly interested in this piece. However, it's Kovu, unless you've changed it, and its short. I wish it was longer, because it's very interesting! Good Job!

I realize this has already been reviewed, but I personally like reviewing, so here goes.. Red is corrections, Blue are things I'm commenting on. The early morning cold bit at ...

This is amazing. One, because I'm experiancing this myself, and it does show how my life is going right now. Much too fast. I have nothing at all to correct, ...

Can't wait to read more, that is amazing!

I dont really review things, just compliment/give small pointers. It's a bit confusing but I thought it was pretty good. It gave emotion and an image (to me, at least) ...

I personally liked this, and I have nothing bad to say. Good Job!

Thank you both for the feedback. I'll edit it later, I'm having alot of trouble with this story but I can't stop writing it. I struggle with this story over ...

Read after or Before I don't care... Mystica (The narrarator) is speaking in her Native tounge but it has been 'translated' to english. After she gets to the factory does ...

Thanks guys. I really appreciate this, and I just edited it. Thanks for the feedback. I know its still not good, but I did as much as I thought of. ...

I am also new to the site, adapting slowly but well. I hope you find your way around, and welcome to YWS!

This is personally, realy good. I enjoyed reading it and understood what the horse felt, even though I'm not one. Creative and Intresting, and I really enjoyed reading it.

You shouldn't feel depressed. The poem might feel depressing but that doesn't mean it isn't good. When I read poems, I look forward to visualizing what the author wrote, and ...

I thought that this was really good, for not being a poet. I've never been a good poet, but I've never thought of using it to help writers block. That's, ...

This Is really good! I can't wait to read more.

Lol Really funny, I especially like Ron's first set of lines. Very creative and funny