Flux

Hey Jebbie! I'm glad to hear--- ?--- your enthusiasm. Just ignore my random comments (like the previous one...^) That I make to myself. They're just things I'm not quite sure ...

Allo! Hey, I'm

Here's chapter two. A bit more description of Nostariel. I hope you like it! Rate and Comment please! CHAPTER TWO: The sun rose high above the clouds the next morning. ...

Hey! Fan of Naruto XD Just a few minor mistakes i picked up, but I'm not really good a picking through someone's work for every single gramatical error. Trying to ...

Thanks guys for your help! I'll keep that in mind. and Incognito Temptation, you're easily disctracted my alot of things, so maybe its hereditary, but i'll keep the whol "putting-pronunciations-at-the

Wow. This is wonderful. I've never been a good artist, and since I love horses, I've been drawing them for years, but nothing compares to this. Yeah, yeah, so the ...

Whoops. ^ Jacob... JACOB hit on the new born... not the actor.

Yeah, it may not count as poetry, but I totally agree with you! I had just gotten into Twilight before the whol kafuffle about the movie and yada-yada-yada.... Yeah, Breaking ...

As he unscrewed his watery eyes, out of the very edge of his vision, caught the glimpse of a family picture, hanging on a portrait I just don't get this ...

It was... short. Fairly descriptive. Maybe it could be a bit longer... and a bit more descriptive... but who I am to say all this. I'm not that great at ...

Thanks, "Incognito Temptation". xD I'm glad for the constructive critcism. and aren't you always lazy? Anyways, the second chapter includes more description of Nostariel. No worries. And yes, some of ...

Look, sorry for such a long chapter. I wish I were able to shorten it, but there's no where that really suits the ending of a chapter. But anyways, this ...

Since I'm still just a beginner with writing and such, I'd have to say that it was quite descriptive. Yes, I think it could be even more descriptive... but still, ...

Told ya I'd be the first to post! O.o nice name by the way... Anyways, from what I've learned so far about YWS is that there is the 2:1 ratio! ...

Hmm... favourite and least favourite words... Favourite -- Utter (Can't say this word out loud without cracking up... XD) Least Favourite -- Arrogant/ Arrogance (Probably because I just hate arrogant ...