Flux

Work in progress! Name: Sebastian Graham Gender: Male Birth Date: August seventeenth, 1993 Died at the age of: Sixteen Cause of Death: Drowned. Personality: Written Appearance: *Photo: Occupation: Lik

Hello there! A great title is a title that catches a reader's attention -- and I liked the sound of this one! So what I'm going to do with my ...

I'm no poetry expert -- don't kill me. I love the title, by the way. Now, I believe that WritersUnleashed has caught quite a few things, so there isn't really ...

Flux wrote: I saved you especially for my eightieth review. I'd do, like, a major-er milestone like a hundred ... but who knows how long it'll be 'till I get ...

Well, basically this is super cool. I can see why you like it -- it's interesting. Well, maybe hearts are a little cliche to draw when bored (;P) But it ...

Wow Razi! No nitpicks from me really, except that seriously, this could also be a poem. I'd love to hear the music to it, though! Innocence lingers until you see ...

Now, just a question ... I see the "Gender: Male" in your profile blurb thingy ... and the point of this contest is to write in the view point of ...

I know nothing at all about poetry -- absolutely nothing ... except when something sounds good. So as I've decided to review this, I'll put my corrections in bold . ...

WALLACE: Mom tended to worry too much. For a person who'd been named "Jubliation" ... yeah, she worried a lot . You'd think that maybe at sixteen you'd be able ...

Ah, here I am with my profile! Name: Wallace Greenwald. Age: Sixteen. Gender: Male. Rank: Sidekick. Superhero/Sidekick Parents: His father was the supervillain "Dittomaster", and his mother was Jubila

We start on Wednesday for sure? Why not now?

Character Profile Age: fifteen Name: Ramona Adler Gender: female History/Background: Ramona is originally of German origin, but she's grown up in South Africa. Her family had moved there when she ...

If you actually HAVE a disability, pick a different one. We want you to use your imagination. I cannot justify if I do, or do not have said disability, but ...

Wow . What a powerful poem -- and I'm not just saying that. What an interesting thought, perspective, description brought into all this. So, as I can't really find any ...

Hey, this was a really sweet little poem! Fimbling fingers turning sideways in their clumsy confusion -- handholding really wasn’t so difficult, but I knew that you were flustered-blustered, red-fac