Flux

Yes, yes, I realize it's long -- the chapter has turned out to be around 8,000 words, I apologize! - - - After most couples had promenaded into the large ...

This is a possible first chapter to a story I'm writing. I haven't bothered spell-checking it and stuff, so don't really worry too much about spelling errors/ grammar, unless something ...

I vary. Lately, if I'm trying (keyword: trying) to write a novel, I've started outlining. That way, I know where to go, and ultimately what I'm trying to get at ...

@Everyone: YWSers are gorgeous, as always! @Puzzler: your hair is gorgeous! And you look way older than 14! (I'm fifteen, and you've out-looked me! lol)

xX_white_shadow_Xx wrote: Although once (this has nothing to do with ugly eyes) I was in a play with a guy who had gold eyes. No joke. They were beautiful, and ...

Hey there! I love the song Lucky , by the way! lol So, I didn't really notice much mistakes in here -- just a couple, if any, really. The only ...

HAHAHAH! Love it!

Feel free to kill Ramona off at any time -- I'm dropping out.

@AuroraOrodel: That's actually a really good idea ... you've inspired a hobby for me! @BigCheesyGrin: Same. Or that their race was wiped out before finishing ... @Nate: Ahah, good advice. ...

Any female banana who says "Avast" is right in my books. And believe me; Us YWS junkies will suck you in until there is no turning back. Soon you will ...

Welcome Bladesmith! I'm sure you'll end up liking it as much as most of us members do! There's a lot of room on YWS for a person to get their ...

Welcome to the site, Codex! First of all, you'll find your place in writing at YWS; everyone is really welcoming -- and you'll probably find a slew of other procrastinators ...

Wow! I'm surprised this even got any more comments on it -- I thought it was a dead post, just floating in cyberspace! @FLOWER CHILD: Well, at the time I ...

Here's a crappy attempt at a post! MONA: How long does it take for a reality to hit? Well, as long as it takes to accept it. But I didn't ...

Hey Lily! I'll put my changes/ suggestions in bold, okay? The beating of my heart ; i t increases , just as the light goes dark. One thing I noticed ...