FluttershyFan

I really like this story. The only critiques I have are, for starters, I was didn't know what the relationship between Becca and the narrator. In the description, I believe ...

This is short and sweet. Though a slightly negative spin, "the hand that breaks our bones most gently" is something very descriptive. I often find myself describing my own life ...

This poem seriously sounds professional. This sounds like something we would read in my English class and annotate afterwards. I love the way you compare love to a growing tree ...

I really found it interesting how you would describe the emotions and characteristics of the boy in this story. "Reptilian eyes" for example. The description it not too much or ...