FloralTiara

Well, it was certainly interesting. In a good way, of course. Now, at some points, it reminded me of the little mermaid. (The Disney version) But other than those few ...

"Miss Maria!" a young males voice cried from across the pasture. In the distance, a tall figure could be seen moving closer and closer. Maria groaned in disgust. She knew ...

Though it's rather short, it seems you've got an interesting idea to start with. Do you plan to extend this? If not, it could make a good blurb... Someone's probably ...

Okay, I just finished reading, so I have a few things to say. The first thing; I really liked it. Your idea seems interesting, and I'm a bit curious as ...

"I won't let go until you surrender!" "Can you at the very least get off, you're crushing me!" "Not until you surrender, Simon!" "Maria!" Maria simply laughed at her captive. ...

Aww, that was pretty cute. As both people have said before me, there is a bit too much dialogue, compared to what there is with descriptions and etc. I think ...

Pretty cool! It was interesting, but very vague. Not so vague that the reader just ends up tilting their head in confusion, but vague enough so that someone can make ...

Esmaeiria twisted her ring around her finger. More specifically, her engagement ring. The tiny band of silver and rose coloured diamond that would forever bind her to the man her ...

Well, that was interesting to say the least. I'll definietly read some more if you upload it! Oh little thing though. Several times you use the word "Angles." Do you ...

This is a great story, and your descriptions are interesting to say the least. There are a few little things that I noticed though that are very easy to fix. ...

Well, it seems other reviewers have already gone over the grammar and spelling mistakes, so um, I'll go over something else. The idea with the magic doors seems very interesting, ...

"I hear he passed away of a broken heart. It's understandable. I personally could never comprehend his pain after the loss of Queen Illeira and the child." An elven dressmaker ...

Hi. I'm Laura, and obviously, I'm pretty new here. Hmm, I'm 17, and I love to write, and umm, I really don't know what else to day about myself... Umm, ...