FloralTiara

"Dedication, talent, and determination. Those three little things could make someone's career, and lack of them could destroy it. I really hope we have all three, because if not, we're ...

“As scary as it sounds, you have to jump off the edge before you can soar across the skies. Sometimes you fall, and I won't lie, that will suck, a ...

No memories, no life outside their own world, no names, no families, no identity. They were the Lost, and that's all they'd ever be. The Lost were only children. Most ...

You've got an interesting start, and I'm rather curious as to why Bryleigh wasn't normal anymore. The only complaint I have about this is the opening line. While it's fine ...

"The minutes become days, and the days become years! How long has it been?" Ophelia mumbled dramatically. She was spread out on her bed, face down, trying to cut herself ...

This was a story I started writing a couple months ago, and that I recently started working on again. I'd like some opinions, and would really like to get some ...

Well, this isn't bad, but it certainly had room to grow. Quite literally. You could go on and tell a huge tale about why this girl was stabbed, rather than ...

Hello there! Like the others, I am here to review! Okay, let's start with the first thing I noticed. You don't start each sentence with a capital letter. Even just ...

Well, this story seems interesting, and I would love to see where you go with it. Okay, there's one line that confused me, unfortunately, it was the first. James Caraway ...

Hello there! Well, overall, your story is very good, but I have a few little things I'd like to point out. Hopefully you'll find them useful! Okay, the first thing ...

Okay, I'm here to review. I actually found this very entertaining, but of course, there are a few little tiny things that I'd like to point out. Though the majority ...

Hello, I'm here to review! Anyway, it's pretty good, but there are a few things I'd like to point out, to help make it the best possible story it could ...

Hmm, where to start, where to start. Oh, let's start with five simple words. I absolutely love this story! Your writing style is wonderful, it's not boring, but it didn't ...

Well, to sum this peice up, it's a very, very, very heavily condensed version of a novel I was writing. BEcause I wanted to enter it in a contest on ...

Hi Taptoe! I'm Laura, or Flora, or Tiara, or whatever you prefer. People tend to just give me whatever nickname they want, and I'm okay with that! Anyway, welcome to ...