Flit

I have one. whoops.

OMGOSH I love it!!! reminds me of how sad I was when that girl in little house on the prarie (or whatever book it was, something of the kind) went ...

The problem, m'dear, is the rhyme scheme, but tis easily remedied. You asked me to love you and I tell you I once did. Your serenades and stories make me ...

I tried to review this properly but I couldn't find anything obvious to change(cept maybe the comma when you say: I have, endured ). Just, maybe when you say things ...

My brain hurts. That was amazingly good! I always see your name next to a poem and sigh and think, well, here is something that's going to be irritatingly good. ...

There is some good imagery and wording in this poem, but something seemed off to me; a little forced? Like you were focused on making it old fashioned and not ...

I didn't think this was awful; get rid of everything above 'You are the blood that caresses me' and it would be good. I really like the bottom part; it ...

Apollo and Daphne- Bernini. Baroque. - The whiteness at the centre of the noon sun the glow that attacks your eyes and makes them scrunch up in defence; that is ...

Well that was a bit brilliant. I'm jealous. You built up a picture really well; I could see the house. And the lady you put in my head was like ...

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It is good, like the rhyming and stuff, and I liked the repetition of the What'shername part. But this girl comitted suicide, and that's a huge topic, and you've done ...

that was just INCREDIBLE and SAD and POWERFUL and a million other complimentary words. I'm so very very extremely jealous and I'm afraid you're going to have to help me ...

Art has to have some sort of composition or skill or meaning involved. You kinda of just snapped some pictures, so it doesn't really count as real artwork. If you ...

It's really cool! He looks all majestic and a bit evil :] can I draw him?? xx