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Re: Chapter One of Bloody Canvas
This is great! Anything that i see that's wrong with this is already pointed out by the others. Keep up the good work! :D
Apr 18, 2008 -
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Great! Were a lot less mistakes than the other one. Correct me if I'm wrong, but is Trey a male? I'm a bit confused on that. But other than that, ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: The Heart of Life
This is great! Everything that i could see that should be fixed had already been pointed by others. Great job on this. I've read many personifications on the sun, but ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Glass Walls
This is GREAT! From what i understand, it's about deafness being a blockade from the hearing world. And you were very clear about the words. I think by "Bridge" you ...
Apr 11, 2008