Fiyero

Thanks! I'm really glad you like it!

No, it was great! I'm trying to use this to aid me overall, so thanks!

Okay, I'm not sure I like this poem. I feel really bad in sayng this, but it's just not all there for me. First of all, your rhyming seems rather ...

I really do quite enjoy this. It's beginning is a little rocky, because you are thrown right in without having an understanding of the characters. However, if you wanted a ...

No, I'm actually not an artist. I am terrible at drawing, so I let words be my art. :D For the embossed line, I meant that blood and war seem ...

No, you gathered the mood perfectly! I had just wanted it to be playful, and I'm glad it came off that way! I'm very happy to see that you enjoyed ...

Rainbow I carry my palette, paint of all shades, Tints galore lie in puddles arrayed. I dip in my brush and carefully swirl, Lift it up, out, and on canvas ...

I really like the melancholy atmosphere of this poem. It definitely stands out because you were able to pull it off so easily. One thing I'd like to say is ...

Wow, this is a much more depressing piece of literature. Very much in contrast to the last part. I like it because of that. It definitely does leave me wondering ...

I was also drawn in by the title, and I think the idea is a good one. The one thing I don't like about this poem is the repetitiveness of ...

I agree with Deanie about the unique setting for this telling of the Beauty and the Beast. However, it doesn't really surprise me that the Minotaur wasn't monstrous because he's ...

This is an interesting poem. You take a unique take on homeless people, longing to have a place of their own. One comment I have is that if a thought ...

This is a very chilling poem, but I was bothered by the flow. The beats in each line was constantly changing as I read, and it was very choppy. It ...

I must say I am very happy with your concluding stanza especially. The main idea of this poem, to believe in yourself, is a true life lesson to be learned, ...

I really like this poem in general. I feel that most of the needed criticism has already been made. Howev, I would like to say that for such an unknown ...