Firestalker

Thanks for the critique again. Now i fulfill my promise "don’t deny it!” he snarled and I felt like he'd slapped me. His eyes were devouring it seemed, they had ...

Hope this is I woke up screaming, again. It was the same vivid, reoccurring nightmare I had been having for months. I waited a moment or two to slow by ...

Okay lest see if what Hopeful_Youth said is true as its 12 midnight now. Hope its not though :shock: (what boy shouldn't it be 'a' boy?? not sure here though) ...

wow the prologue is interesting. I guess its about cats. And is reminds me of a book i read similar to this, when i mean similar i don't mean you ...

Hey there Natalie. Nice to meet you. I see this is your first post. We warmly welcome to YWS. :wink: :wink: Zwelkov had an extreme obsession and knowledge of the ...

Ooooooooh A vampire lover Well then I'm honored to critique But first of all if you have got this idea from the film Underworld or Underworld:evolution then it should be ...

Chapter 1 -The Prophecy- (one month earlier) “Riley stop worrying,” exclaimed Sam. “How can I not worry?” I asked. Sam and I had been best friends for years. We had ...

Hey Boon. i guess this is one of the reasons Serenity chose you to be the head lycan huh :wink: A pained scream tore through the silent night in the ...

"DANIEL ROWERT" I jumped as I heard my name (Being shouted) .I had been so absorbed in a book that I had quite forgotten my surroundings.I peered over the book ...

First of all is this a prologue or a epilogue or The beginning of the story? My name is Delihla Bee. I try to pretend my family is at least ...

Okay so i am not a Cristian, and okay i have no idea if 'Amin' who ever he is, is just one of your characters or if he really existed. ...

Heart breaking really. Stories set when Hitler ruled Germany always catches my heart. Really heart catching. Are you going to continue it or is the story just a kinda a ...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm October 10, 1692 "No! Let go of me!" "You're not going anywhere, little witch." The man said gruffly, as he tried to drag me onto the back of the ...

Lets seeee Prologue: Emmy Foster, one of the first Listeners Far, far away, they are singing. They are singing to the earth, to the moon, to the sun and to ...

WOW you must be very experienced. No mistakes as far as i can see. Thats a extremely explained story. what can i say other than say its magnificent and that ...