Firestalker

'And on to part two' the friendly Fire said. And so I am here, ready to critique as said ^^ Instant poetry that sucks :P Hehe, Lets have a read ...

Hey Golden,it took me some time to go through your first few chapters but i'm finally here, hehe. So as requested, I'm reviewing your story. Nit Picks Snapping out of ...

Hey Breena, Fire here. I'm here to critique as requested. I noticed that you haven't updated your post since Joy critiqued it, so forgive me if I repeat points that ...

Here I am Disturbed, Took my time, didn't I? Sorry about that. Had a lot of things to do, hehe. And onwards to the critique... Nit Picks My phone vibrated ...

Hey Disturbed (nice name by the way, leaves a kinda aftertaste in the mouth which makes me want to keep reapeating it over and over again, hehe) Guess who, its ...

Classy!!! Hey! How're you doing? It's me, Fire. You do remember me right? right?? Haha, I don't usually critique in general fiction but lets give it a try shall we? ...

EDIT - I just realized that this was chapter 6 part 2 o.O How stupid of me.... Now, i'll be going to review chapters one to five, sigh, sorry about ...

EDIT - I just realized that this was chapter 6 o.O How stupid of me.... Now, i'll be going to review chapters one to five, sigh, sorry about my idiocy ...

Hey Breena, I'm Fire, and let me say first - Welcome warmly to the greatest writing site in the galaxy - YWS. Yes, its true. Since my manners are a ...

Hey RachaelElg, Fire here, I just happened to come across some of your reviews and they were, to put it simply, awesome. So i thought of checking out some of ...

Hey Kitx (I can call you that right...?), Ahh, tis been a long time since I visited or critiqued in YWS. Your my first critique in sevral years, hehe. Hope ...

Okay, after many days of lethargy, I'm reviewing this at last, but I can't garantee that it'll be as good as the last review, cause I'm a little bad at ...

:sigh: It seems that we've both got the same problem. No one will review our stories, except a few close friends, oh well that's life huh? Now back to the ...

I'm back! Lets give this a brutal Critique shall we? :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: The Review In front of her was a the worn rocking chair that she remembered so clearly ...

Guess who's here to review your story! Yes! It's me! The one and only friendly YWS Fire!!!! Haha, and back to the review. :P That was the only reason they ...