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Re: The Farmer
This is a great story! It has so much discriptive detail. It kept your interest the entire time. The vocabulary was amazing. The piece was well written. I really have ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: While I Scampered Across The Street
This story was very interesting (in a good way). I wasn't really expecting something like this. I thought it was amusing and a creative idea. I get the idea with ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Pirate Princess
Overall, this story was amazing. It left on a cliffhanger, which I particularly enjoyed. I can't wait to see what happens next! Although, I did notice a few spelling errors. ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: OMIT
This poem really expresses your feelings. Your words made me connect to things like this that have happened to me too. The best writing, I feel, are the ones that ...
Nov 16, 2014
