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Re: Never Forget That We Were Ever Chapter 2
Hey, there, omgitstaylorchu! FireFox here to review on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! :) I reviewed your third chapter already, I believe, and decided to check this one out ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Never Forget That We Were Ever Chapter 3
Hey, omgitstaylorschu! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. This is just a given. Don't worry too much about this ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 5)
Hey, there, Basilthecat! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. This is a given. But this is not to be ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: If the World Could Only Love Me Chapter 2 Part 2/2
Hey, again, Defyingravity! FireFox here to review another one of your pieces, on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. This is not really a big deal ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 6
Hey, there, Aravis! FireFox here to review on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang on this fine Review Day! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. This is a given; we all have ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars - Episode2(The Road to Articus)
Hi, rikkidas! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang on this fine Review Day! :) Okay, I'm not sure this is posted in the ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Chapter 11
Hi, AmethystNight! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. Not a big deal, as this is something that should be ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Dancing In The Minefields- chapter 5
Hi, supermeggs! FireFox here on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang to review your piece! (Yes, that is our real name!) Needs Improvement: 1. Spelling/grammar. This is an issue for ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Semper Fi
Hey, CelerityFire! FireFox here on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang to review your poem! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. This is a given. We all have grammar/spelling issues from time ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Grace
Hey, dbrick! FireFox here to review on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang on this fine Review Day! Needs Improvement: 1. Formatting. Obviously, you know the formatting is an issue, ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: When My Smart Brain Decides to Forsake Me
Hi, KittyCatMeow! FireFox here to review your poem for the Apple Dumpling Gang on this fine Review Day! :) Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar. I didn't really see any spelling errors, ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Party Poppers
Hi, PumpkinCat! (I have a dog named Punkin! Close enough, right?) FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang this Review Day! Needs Improvement: 1. ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Season of the Dead
Hey, there, yubbies21! FireFox here to review for the Apply Dumpling Gang! (Yes, that is our real name!) Needs Improvement: 1. It's probably just me, because I am a grammar ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: If the mirrors had eyes... Chapter 1
Hi, AlexSushiDog! FireFox here to review for the Apple Dumpling Gang! (Yes, that is our name!) Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. This is pretty much a given with any piece of ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Government.
Hi, Strange! I meant to review this when I read it yesterday, but didn't get around to writing the review, so here I am again! FireFox here, reviewing for the ...
Nov 24, 2013