Fibbles

Wow, that was great :) you had great rhyming, and spelling. a few parts were confusing. but overall, i got the feeling of like death or something... is that what ...

I had a hard time understanding what point you were trying to get across, until the last sentence. "I'm drowning in this love sea" that was really creative, i could ...

That was really cool. I love the way you worded things, it made me feel like i was part of the poem or something. You might want to consider making ...

okay, i wrote this story in like... thirty minutes. So i know its not that good, but its the first one i posted on this site! So it doesn't have ...

In my house there are two rules: follow the rules, and don’t get caught if you don’t. My momma works all day to pay for the rent, and my dad ...

um... good job with the onomonopiea (however you spell it) but maybe you should try adding actual words, and adding emotion to your poem. like, make a central message, not ...

thats an awesome gift, thanks niteowl. And yes, im Jenni's friend. Oh, and now im learning how to play Dust in the Wind!!! I'm very excited! Hopefully all of us ...

Right now im not writing my own guitar music, but hopefully in the future i will. I'm currently learning how to play the song 'Wonderwall' and i can play some ...

okay, this should be fun! my first review!!! Anyway, it was very good. It's like, your own way of explaining something. And it was very well written. Yes, it was ...

Its a really great poem. Doesn't go too deep into emotion, but gets the point across. I think if you showed this poem to someone, they'd definately understand what you ...

oh, well i just write anything that comes to me!! and i love to play guitar, and volleyball, and i like pretty much all music, and i totally voted for ...

i just got an account on this website, and my friend told me it was really cool. so i hope i get to know alot of you guys!