FemmeFatale

Thank you so much for your comment @luxevampwolfwithwand! I appreciate it! To start off I know I should have explained more thouroughly so forgive me :-). This is a clip, ...

This was realllyy good. I had a good idea of what was going on even though I hadnt read the previous three chapters (which I will) which is a great ...

I really liked this. The way you transition from one paragraph into the next really helps your whole work flow together. The paragraph that started with "But I'm still a ...

Haha, thank you so much! :-)

I went into the washroom tent that they had set up for the ladies to put my hair up and splash my face with water. The Italian sun had risen ...

I love the way you started off the prologue. The descriptive way you set the scene and depicted the man that was to give the results of the competition was ...

Wow, this was reealllyy good. The way you described the different shape shifters (like the guy that turned into a tree and the evil guy that turned into a dragon ...

We used to spend so much time together. Whenever I came to Italia for the summer, it was with him that I found solace, happiness. He was my favorite person ...

This is really beautiful. It reminded me of something Evanescence, Escape the Fate or The Foo Fighters might sing haha :-) Anyway, I relly liked the similies and metaphors that ...

I really like this. I like the way you used similies, metaphors and personifacation to bring the pen to life. Very nice job.

I love the way you transition through the poem by relaying different spells to the different situations, it made the poem really flow together, especially for me, a Hp fan. ...