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Okay, I know this sounds weird, but I love this even though I partially dont get it. The end of this narritive, my heart knew what you were saying, but ...

This was really fantastic. Even though you broke your words up alot by using periods, it did not make your poem choppy. It ran together smoothly, like a thumping heart ...

III. Useless “Everyday I’m living proof I don’t want to be used, I want to be useless.” -Tiny Animals “Excuse me,” I stopped a young man passing by after five ...

WOWZERS! this was really beautiful. I guess I think it was so amazing because i can relate so much to it, as can many other readers I'm sure. Your last ...

Why are you so good a writer!!! I loved this! ALOT! This flowed so easily that it showed that you really knew and understood your characters. The narrator is insanely ...

This is really beautiful, but really sad (I hope this didn't really happen to you, but if it did im sorry :-() Anywho, your writing is superb, it almost stopped ...

@Cresent and Confetti Thanx for your comments! I have deleted that paragraph of the Author's note so as not to confuse people or have them relate it to twilight, because ...

II. Sinkin’ Soon “Everybody hold your breath, ‘Cause we’re gonna be sinkin’ soon.” -Nora Jones My father was waiting for me in New York at a private airfield in Essex, ...

I. Bird Song “But I couldn’t scream, I couldn’t shout. Couldn’t scream, and I couldn’t shout.” -Florence + The Machine Four Years Later... “I still don’t understand,” I said truthful

Hello Reader, This is just an author's note, to explain a few of the crazy things going on in my novella The War of the Swans, so if you want, ...

This was really fantastic! I love the easy flow of your words. The first sentence "The sky’s summerblue with simmering dust." really did a good job of drawing me in. ...

Wow, that was amazing. Really sad, but amazing. You transfer your flow of thoughts to paper very well. You incorporate a wide range of things so that everyone has at ...

Wow....would it be cheezy for me to say that this poem pretty much blew my mind? It drew me in at the first sentence and all of the sudden I ...

I liked this alot. There was only a few things that need tweaking. First, thing was the sentence: "He tried to ata his thoughts:" Maybe you meant to say "gather ...

Thank you sooo much guys for all of your reviews! I reeaaallly appreciate it! @Arspoetica: Thanks so much for all of your compliments haha :-). @Wariofart: Yes, the "He" she ...