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Re: Someone I know
Wow, this is an amazing drawing. I liked how you focused more on the features of the face rather than the actual face. Also, I am absolutely in love with ...
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Re: Bowl of Rice
This is absolutely adorable. I can't even say more than that. Amazing job! :-)
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Blank, Part 1
This was really nice. I liked the simple flow of it, I guess its because I just like short, sweet and simple things. This is quite nice, you have a ...
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Re: Grace
Wow, this was really beautiful. The first sentence captured me completely. My favorite line was: Redemption is what I seek. That was perfect. It was simple, but so greatly composed ...
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Re: The War of the Swans: Chapter Five: Tea Party
V. Tea Party Welcome to the Tea Party Wanna be my V.I.P. Didn’t R.S.V.P. That’s okay, that’s okay. -Kerli “It’s stunning, Verona. Absolutely gorgeous,” I said in awe, twisting and ...
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Re: The War of the Swans: Chapter One: Bird Song
Thank you for all of your reviews! @Demeter: Thanx for your read and comment :-) Actually Isabel is Princess of Italy, and her uncle, King James is King of Italy, ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (Twitterized)
I seriously didnt think that this twitterized potter could get any better, but it just did! This made me laugh even harder than the first which I would have thought ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)
You are seriously one of the most epic people on the face of the planet for thinking this up! I laughed my ass off from beginning to end (but especially ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: The War of the Swans: Chapter Four: Hang Me Up To Dry
Hey guys :-) I know this chapter starts off slow, but it gets better at the end. I promise the next chapter will go straight into the action. Thank you ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The Window
I liked this, even though I didn't full grasp the point. It was simple and sweet, which I liked. I like your word flow, keep writing! I would like to ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Same Time Tomorrow
I loved both of these pictures! I liked the second one more than the first, even though it was a little more unfocused, the colors were more vivid and the ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Everlasting, Never-ending
This was reall nice. Even though it made me partially sad at the end, it was wonderful writing. I like the flow of your words, the mesh together nicely! Your ...
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Re: Photography: Peeking through the Pink Forest
I think the colors are pretty, but you should try working on more of a focus point, you know? Like maybe a specific point you want to vierwer to look ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: A Kiss Without Lips
This was fantastic. You are a brillian writer! I love your flow of words, it is so efforeless. You captured me from the beginning and held me to the end. ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The War of the Swans: Chapter Three: Useless
Thanks for allof your comments! They really helped me get great points of view. I have enclosed all of my comments (for confetti and WaywardBird) because some of it has ...
Aug 5, 2011
