FemmeFatale

VI. Love Lost A love was lost, but now we’ve found it So if you flash your heart, I won’t deny it I promise. -The Temper Trap I could not ...

Wow....this was reeally pretty. I love your flow of speech. It's really natural and rhythmic, and it doesn't seemed forced. I like that. My favorite lines were: "With everything that ...

Two words: Friggin Epic! ............That is all :-p

I LOVE BLACKBIRD BY THE BEATLES!!!! I just had to get that out, it made my day when I saw it on the list. Now I shall read the story ...

Okay, so im just going to start off by saying sorry for such a horribly review, because the first commenter took up all of the changes I was going to ...

This was pretty good. I like the easy flow of it, it dragged me in and held me to the end. some of your metaphors were outstanding, like: "It was ...

This was really nice. I love the sarcatic thoughts that go through the main characters head, that really drew me in. costli because I really like sarcastic humor haha. I ...

I really like this! Your writing is very nice and the major thing I wanted to compliment you on is you imagery. WOOOOWWWWWWW it was sooooo good. You have some ...

This was a very nice bit of work. Im really glad I chose to read it in the day rather than at night haha, I am easily spooked by these ...

This was really great. I love how you broke the story up into diary entries! I usually dont like that, but you made yours flow so well that I barely ...

This is really good stuff you have here. I would like to start off by saying that i reaally loved the name Denror, haha and I have no idea why ...

First, let me start off by saying that you are an amazing writer! When I first came to this story, and saw the legnth I considered going to something else ...

Holy crap........that was pretty fantastic. Your writing style is absolutely positively amazing. I loved how you kept repeating how the words and actions were empty and without real meaning, but ...

WOOOOOWWW that was amazing. Your writing flow is fantastic! Usually when I see certain genres of poetry the writing seems so choppy, but this one flowed together smoothly and evenly. ...

This is a really nice piece. Even though, since I'm looking at it alone at night, so its sort of giving my the spooks, but its still a nice piece ...