Feltrix

@Sheyren, I don't think Lael is too OP as long as she can still be beaten by the likes of Artemus, Tiernan, etc. Also, I'd think she would have trouble ...

@Lael, I would guess that Arlen would end up in Needlespur, where he could run into Adelaide or even Sirjad if he's starting out undercover in the castle. So, Needlespur ...

1, 2, and 6 apply to me.

@Rydia, would you be opposed to a black market where people sell things for their own prices?

I almost never write or read poetry, and when I do, it's basically limited to prophecies. However, I think that "Show, Don't Tell" applies more to poetry than it does ...

Out of curiosity, what do you mean by ae/aer pronouns? The only non-binary pronoun I've heard is 'they,' but my parents find that confusing. I myself think that 'thee' is ...

Could you review and ? I've found your reviews helpful in the past. I know this is a lot at once, so take your time.

@featherstone9086, could you send the link again? I clicked on it and YWS said "I'm afarid I can't let you do that, Dave."

Don't worry about when you post something by. I just wanted to make sure everyone hadn't suddenly lost interest. After Leila gets captured, what would happen to her? Here's a ...

I admit it. I review almost entirely for points, so I can have other people review what I'm writing. Still, I approve of the review system (except that one time ...

Great!

Could you review That would be great. You don't have to review the original version, but if you felt like it, it couldn't hurt.

Does anyone wanna post something? Please?

I think Tiernan should be a skilled alchemist instead of a seer. It makes more sense that he would know how to corrupt æther that way.

I couldn't resist. They can only appear in that order, though.