FelixWindbow

First of all, I wish to appologize for any spelling mistakes. I will run it through a spell check as soon as I am avalible to do so. Second, this ...

Hi sis. I loved it! full of drama. a thesorous could be used to brighten up the story... otherwise, nice work! your bro, Felix Windbow

Hi sister, I saw some things that I would change. I could hear only the crunching of the dying leaves beneath my feet and the wind howling in my ears ...

""Well, this is either the bravest thing we've done… or the dumbest," said Felix. Both Sergio and Samuel nodded in agreement. The three friends were inside a crumbling old fortress ...