FelixWindbow

When felix arrived in the town, he was, first of all, tired and sweaty. His leather cloths were wearing him down and he was really hot. Secondly, he was instantly ...

Heya! Alrighty then, shall we jump to the review? Paragraphs: I will not put anything in quotations here, for if I explain correctly, you will know what I mean. Okay, ...

Hi! I am here like I promised! This chapter was a good one. It was the part where the boy meets the girl. One of the most important parts. I ...

Hey there! This story is brilliant! It does get gory during in the middle, but still. The description of the scenery at the start was the best, I could clearly ...

think this one was my favorite. The way you say things are really funny, for example "He had to be sure that he wasn’t daydreaming, otherwise, he might lose his ...

Felix was walking on a path that had been worn down by many years of use, mostly by travelers and their array of goods. The scenery was purely magnificent. The ...

I pulled off in the dead of night , onto the sandy shore where I began to build a fire to keep me warm and ward off curious animals. When ...

Hey, Just gotta say I loved this poem! It's really well written and I think you get a good point across! So well done and keep writing! Felix Windbow

Cool. More action, less talk. one minute while I make a few edits.

Fun facts! Levi means united, yet he gets taken by the Rulers of the Earth. Felix means happy and prosperous. let's all hope that the fourtune of his name will ...

Eighteen year old Felix Windbow was going on a hunting trip. He was in his final year of apprenticeship. His master, Andreas, was a metal smith, and was also a ...

Thank you! Those are the names of my two best friends. I am trying to make their personality as I might envision theirs just by looking at them. So far, ...

Hi there there is one thing that confused me in this she sat down and pulls out what looks like a cell phone you are using two diffrent tenses, past ...

Just a few typing errors I walked to the edge of the tree's again there is no ' in trees Sure, it was steep, but it was nothing my lean, ...

Hi BlondieMissiAngel Just that reminder was enough to give my determanation a boost and I ran faster It is spelled determination The ocassional bird sang it's soft melody It is ...