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I wished for his hands to touch mine. It was a part of love that I was hoping to find. I'd watch his grey eyes as he would smile at ...

Why hello there :] So i just caught a few little things to fix -- This is a fixing color ! Evil knocks on the door Through the peep hole ...

thank you guys so much for all the comments! :]

Completely relateable :] Ive been there and i've felt the pain of falling for a friend, and this poem pretty much sums it up! Great job! I really like how ...

I really like this! Just like behindthemask said, you said what others are afraid to. I really do like this poem! especially the first stanza, thats what drew me in. ...

So the comment above got the gramatical aspect of it all. But I mainly just comment on how I like the work, because I'm not as good at grammar as ...

--Im going to say how much i enjoyed your poem :] I really liked how it was all haikus! It just added to how dramatic it was :] and i ...

Alrighty :] so i believe the previous comment was great. and i agree. But i would like to just review how i liked your poem. I really enjoyed it! I ...

Out of the corner of my eye, I see you. In the depths of my heart, I need you. Off the tip of my tongue, I don't know what to ...

CHAPTER THREE I tried to just let go of the awkward-ness. I tried to get over the weird feeling I got when he touched me. He had already set my ...

A LITTLE LIE. CHAPTER ONE. Some people ask me "Do you think you'll be together forever?" I mean really people. That’s like me asking "Do you think you'll ever get ...

Thank you for the revieww :] i'll add more feeling next time!! and sorry for the sadness :'[

So im sitting here. For no apparent reason at all. Just thinking of you... And how I was so stupid to fall, For all your stupid tricks, That you did ...

Thanks, both of you for the reviews!!! it really is helping!! i'm trying to put it into what i write next :] thank you so much!!

Before you read: I don't think this is a love poem, but it's mainly talking about a skank. Not a relationship. Please comment, and tell me what to fix! DAMMIT! ...