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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of Tokua. Chapter One. Part One

    hey! Wow great story telling. Couldn't find any errors. Characters fit well together. it was descriptive. Character were very vocal, keep this up. it was very intense story an d ...

    Jun 11, 2009


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