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Re: Children of Tokua. Chapter One. Part One
hey! Wow great story telling. Couldn't find any errors. Characters fit well together. it was descriptive. Character were very vocal, keep this up. it was very intense story an d ...
Jun 11, 2009
hey! Wow great story telling. Couldn't find any errors. Characters fit well together. it was descriptive. Character were very vocal, keep this up. it was very intense story an d ...
Jun 11, 2009