Fauste

I'll have to the girl about this, she will be so excited about it. Fauste

I wasn't sure where to put this. I know I haven't been on in awhile, getting a new network on the comp and all. This is mainly a note from ...

hehheh Thanks for the welcome. Fauste

Salve, Ari! I adore that girl. Well atleast she's nice to someone... *An invisible hands comes and smacks Fauste in the side of the head.* Ow... *rubs head* I do ...

There is no way to indent on this forum that I know of. You might want to ask one of the Mods though, but I doubt it. Now onto the ...

There is no way to indent on this forum that I know of. You might want to ask one of the Mods though, but I doubt it. Now onto the ...

Hmmm...very interesting Fool, before now I had no notion of them. Very tight regulations, maybe with this steady decline they'll revise there creedo and let others in, namely the ones ...

Hmmm...very interesting Fool, before now I had no notion of them. Very tight regulations, maybe with this steady decline they'll revise there creedo and let others in, namely the ones ...

Yes, I saw it last week. Very thought provoking, I am now reading the book. The filming was captivating, as you said Midnight. I haven't seen City of God yet, ...

I think nickel found all the mistakes, I couldn't find any others. I liked this, it drew me in and left me wanting to know more. Cheers Fauste

I have to agree with emotion_less, it seemed hurried and needed more spice in the vocabulary. Other than that, reformat so it's easier to read here. I think you will ...

First thing, on formating, make it so it's not double spaced on lines. It makes it hard to read, and it looks wierd. Secondly, the rhyming in some places seemed ...

As Matt said you need to fix your italics. Other than that, I really like the sort of vagueness that this poem exudes. Your imagery is as my girl would ...

This for some reason reminded me of something Sylvia Plath would have written. It is very Lawrentian to me. I like it, maybe that's just me in my morbidity. I ...

question: why was Hunter deleted?