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Re: their cries
[quote][/quote] Ugh, makes me sick to think that anyone could agree to slavery. your this feeling is strongly expressed in the poem throughout. you have a strong style of writing, ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Sucrose
fantastic piece of work. everyone expects love to sweet, just like sugar. but you took those two, combined the idea of them into something deadly, something dangerous. i loved the ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Alcohol
probably i don't review like others, i think more about what you are writing, then actually looking for grammars and punctuation. nevertheless, the flow was extremely awesome, it didn't get ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Keep Your Hands off My Heart
firstly, i love your idea:D most of us end up writing about missing our loves, or wishing for our loves, or something like that. but you used amazing metaphors to ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 19
i don't think i have enough experience or ability to give you a review as other have done. but what i admire about your writing is, the darkness of really ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Wildflowers
you take a simple piece of writing, a really simple topic and uncomplicated style of writing.. I'd expect it to be not all that awesome. But I was clearly astonished ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: A corridor to remember
‘You might not agree to it all but that’s only because you’re modest. You’ve always been a very caring friend, you’re a very good listener and are certainly very patient. ...
Oct 11, 2011
