FatCowsSis

Hey snow! Thanks for pointing out those errors! And no, I didn't know I would be on the black team....Haha. Thanks again! -FCS

Thanks goldflame!

Thanks Phil! I'll.put up a chapter 1 soon! -FCS

Hey! Thanks for the review! I wanted it to be mysterious, and I am going to write more, I promise! Thanks again! -FCS

Thanks StoryWeaver13! I'll think about it!

Hey CELJiii, Thanks for the tips. I hope we coul grow to be great writers together as well! -FCS

Hey Sarra, Thanks! I'll think about what you said. Adding the prolouge in italics is a great idea! As for Abi's first line, I don't like cussing, so I'm trying ...

Hi. Thanks for the review. In the original document, all of those problems aren't there. Everything is seperate and all that. But, I couldn't get it to be like that ...

Beautiful. So much truth. I needed to read those words. Thanks for publishing this! I think it's a great reminder for all Christians. Keep publishing Christian and religous stuff. I'll ...

Hey ShadowHunter, I hear the same thing. People who strain to be normal aren't normal. Because really, why would you try to be normal? Just why? Like you, I am ...

That should say Rosey Unicorn. Sorry! Autocorrect...ugh!

EmoChikXoX, Thanks! When I wrote the poem, I felt so alone. I'm glad I was able to somewhat capture my emotion in the poem! I'll try to write more like ...

Thanks Sydni. I'll be sure to talk to you. -FCS

Hey! Thanks for those words of wisdom! I'll think about it. As for the rhyming, look at my reply to Emilie. Glad you liked it! -FCS

Emilie, Thanks for the sweet review! As far as the rhyming is concerned, the original version didn't rhyme. Rowdy Unicorn and a few others recommended I use rhyming words in ...