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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Alpha - 2

    This part was great. Though I had some corrections to recommend at the 'tears entering her eyes' part. It would sound better if you use 'tears filled her eyes' or ...

    Jun 11, 2018


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