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Re: The Moon Needs Her Night 21.1
The story was great. I really loved it. Your descriptions are vivid and beautiful and at the same time brief. I also liked your tense co ordination. No more changes ...
Jun 11, 2018 -
Re: So, an Artificer Decides to Kill God -- Prologue
The story is great. I loved it. Tell your friend that it is pretty great. Though I would recommend some changes. Please be careful with the tenses. They are getting ...
Jun 11, 2018