Fantasy♥101

(Its a start, only two chapters) Red Fangs and its Georgeous Employees “Ell?” A voice called. I turned around. Leo was jogging toward me. “Oh, hey Leo.” I said wiping ...

Prologue The freezing temperature broke through the thin coat of a young woman hurrying along a seemingly deserted and harmless road. Something grabbed hold of her Chestnut hair and she ...

I really like it, but I also agree wit hawkie. It's an uneven rythum, and there are some gramatical errors. "While his daughter walks down the aisle. And as she ...

I like it, but why do you rhyme the last line of one with the first line of the next? It also doesn't flow very well, it seems like your ...

Really good!!!!!! I luv it!!!! I especially like how you describe the myserious man who Kira is in love with!!! I haven't read very far into it, its a lot ...

Hi! I have no idea what I'm supposed to do, I cant get anywhere! but, Hello! :)