FantasyWriter25

:? The commas are there for a reason. It helps me when I'm singing that song, it shows me where to pause or stop and where to begin. And trust ...

I thought, you would always be with me to the end. I thought, I'd never have to fear them, again. I thought, the sun in the sky, shined for us, ...

A very interesting poem. I like how it expresses deep feelings about someone dying. I also am intriguied by the thought of someone dying loving you, and someone living hating ...

Very well written! I quite enjoyed reading this poem, you expressed your feelings in a very deep and emotional way. I also liked the way you used bold-print. That made ...

This was a brilliant piece of work! I loved all the descriptions you put into it, and the part about the bet for the golden watch and lighting the sky ...

Hi everybody! My name is Olivia, and I'm new here to Young Writer's Society! I have tried many sites that have creative writing themes and only a select few, such ...