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It was the absence of Seraph's hand on my shoulder that alerted me to his sudden absence; I looked away from the entwined corpses of my parents and followed his ...

NOTA BENE As per Dono's request, I now have full control of Seraph until further notice.

*blinks* *blinks again* ...That's it? Oy. All right. First of all, the first word of the second line should be "are" as you have two nouns preceding it. "Love and ...

I agree with Jack and Jig, Grif.

There was something strange about Seraph's touch. Between the icy texture of the runes and the warm skin, callused by hard use, it seemed calculated to simultaneously send shivers through ...

It was fully dark out before I even realized that I wasn't alone. I rubbed my sore eyes with the heels of my hands and looked over to see Seraph, ...

HOOOOKAY. So the critique to end all critiques. Yes, I am going to tackle all three chapters--plus prologue--in one post. Suicidal? I prefer to think of it as devoted. Your ...

We should have reached Sedgeley a little after midday; the quickest way there would be clear this time of year, and the fact that we no longer had the horses ...

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I'm going to quote the master for this one. imagination bodies forth The forms of things unknown, the poet's pen Turns them to shapes, and gives to airy nothing A ...

By the time Valin had me seated by the fire, I was utterly exhausted. Traveling on a sprained ankle, even with help, was no mean feat, after all. The wind ...

*thumbs up!* Where does this leave us with the pioneers and everything, though?

looks like something you'd see in the lobby of a second-rate hotel, actually. And not even out in the open; tucked back into the alcove with the germ-ridden telephone and ...

I hesitated as Carmenia began to move towards where Valin and the others were congregating for departure, and she looked back at me. One of her arms was hooked across ...

Oo I'm going to be critiquing a lot of creepy poetry for this next month, aren't I? :lol: I actually think this poem flows better than child, and while, as ...